231

"It's a play on words" I said. "Like that song by the Smiths."

"Yes, we understand that, but where do you go from there?"
My pitch for Girlfriend In A Comma was going worse than expected.

"I don't know, but you can see that comma and coma are really similar, can't you?"

"Yes" he said "But I'm not sure if we can fund a film that doesn't have a plot."

"You can't deny that it's a play on words though, can you?"

"No" he said. And you know what? He really couldn't.


Josh, Hampshire.